Chris Jones' article on Roger Ebert is a beautifully written
journey through a portion of Ebert's life that allows the reader to develop an
emotional connection with the story. Jones used multiple voices throughout the
article in order to spice up the tone, imagery, and connection with the story
line of the article. Chris Jones used third person the majority of the article
as well as first person through Roger Ebert. The shifts between these two
points of view allowed for the article to not only be more interesting, but
also added a more personal touch to the reading. The reader can clearly see
when Roger Ebert is saying something and when Jones is reflecting on things
that he has observed himself.
The great detail that Chris Jones goes into while writing from his
perspective is so thorough and allows for the reader to get involved in the
scenery and what he himself is observing. For example, "He opens a new
page in his text-to-speech program, a blank white sheet. He types in capital
letters, stabbing at the keys with his delicate, trembling hands: my
tribute, appears behind the cursor in the top left corner. on the first show
after his death. But Ebert doesn’t press the button that fires up the speakers.
He presses a different button, a button that makes the words bigger. He presses
the button again and again and again, the words growing bigger and bigger and
bigger until they become too big to fit the screen, now they’re just letters,
but he keeps hitting the button, bigger and bigger still, now just shapes and
angles, just geometry filling the white screen with black like the three
squares. Roger Ebert is shaking, his entire body is shaking, and he’s still
hitting the button, bang, bang, bang, and he’s shouting now. He’s standing
outside on the street corner and he’s arching his back and he’s shouting at the
top of his lungs" (Jones 7). This excerpt perfectly describes Roger
getting upset and from the word choice, the imagery comes to life and the
reader can feel Roger's anger. Although he cannot physically shout, you can
feel the passion and imagine how angry he is that the words are shouting for
him. The word choice used throughout the article is also what helped to drive
the emotional aspect given to Jones' voice.
Chris Jones also uses the “voice” of Roger Ebert to convey his
persona to the reader. The excerpts and notes that Ebert writes to Jones or on
his blog and Jones' own observations help to formulate the positive, sweet,
passionate, realistic and gentle man that Ebert is. The quote, "Ebert
takes joy from the world in nearly all the ways he once did. He has had to find
a new way to laugh—by closing his eyes and slapping both hands on his knees—but
he still laughs… And he still finds joy in books, and in art, and in movies—a
greater joy than he ever has” (Jones 7) is a perfect example of Ebert’s persona
illustrated in the article.
I also agree with how powerful the imagery was in Jones' piece. The part of the story where Ebert gets angry and starts banging on the keys in order to show that he's angry and shouting is the best example of the struggle that Ebert has to express himself as well as the outlet he chooses to show his emotions. Jones takes note that Ebert does not turn up the speakers on his device, which asks the question: why not? Why did Ebert feel that reading was better than sound? Is it because it requires more thought than just separating our lips and letting whatever is on the tip of our brains fall out?
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