Komunyakaa’s poems, “Camouflaging the Chimera” and “Facing It” both have
a similar underlying theme: war. In “Camouflaging the Chimera”, Komunyakaa
describes the horrors of Vietnam war.
The
first three stanzas takes the reader into the dangerous terrain and captures
the uncertainty that this terrain has and uses strong imagery that allows the
reader to envision the riverbank in Vietnam. In the first three stanza,
Komunyakaa uses literal imagery to describe the terrain and then, in the
seventh, stanza, he uses figurative imagery, “wrestling iron through grass. /
We weren’t there. The river ran/ through our bones. Small animals took refuge /
against our bodies; we held out breath,” this stanza is embellished with
abstract imagery and captures the soldiers’ fear. The soldiers are trying so
hard to blend in with the jungle of Vietnam, that eventually the jungle becomes
a part of them. The title of the poem, Chimera, is a mythical monster that is
composed of one or more creatures. The title suggests that the Chimera is the
jungle and the soldier’s surroundings but I think the Chimera can also be man
itself and the war as well as the jungle because men were the one who created
this war. Nonetheless, Komunyakaa does an outstanding job capturing the Vietnam
jungle and its enigma.
In “Facing It”, Komunyakaa takes the reader to the Vietnam Memorial. However,
Komunyakaa does a brilliant job in revealing flashbacks and using the Memorial
as a backdrop to recount the many memories that surrounded the war. By gazing
at the memorial, the speaker (who I believe is Komunyakaa himself) that the
memorial wall is not just some granite stone that has names engraved on it, but
it is something he identifies with on a much deeper level. The speaker tries to
fight to keep in his emotions but the wall triggers flashbacks of the past to
come trickling back in the surface of his mind, haunting him.
Overall,
the technique Komunyakaa uses the most to make his poems come alive is visual
imagery by using personification, metaphors, and other figurative language to
take the reader to the place the poem takes place. These two poems are haunting
and truly expresses the horrors of the Vietnam war.
The way you analyzed these poems was so insightful! I got to appreciate in new depths the imagery the many direct metaphors used throughout the poems to describe the Vietnam war. The narrator uses descriptions of the place itself to express the horrors of the war, and you invoked those descriptions.
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